Neighbors

2013-07-24 · 첨삭 강사 Giselle

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In my opinion, I hope my neighbors have manners. I think everyone wants that. For example, our family never smoke. But some neighbors smoke in their bathrooms. So, cigarette smoke comes my home. It is very rude. And it is the root of comflict with neighbors. So I think manners is based on good neighbors.

강사 첨삭

Happy Hump Day [이름]! Thank you for sharing your thoughts once again. You did a great job in making your sentences today. Keep up the good work! See you! -- T. Giselle ^^   In my opinion, I hope my neighbors have manners.>> Correct.I think everyone wants that.>> Correct.For example, our family never smoke.>>  Correct.But some neighbors smoke in their bathrooms.>> Correct.So, cigarette smoke comes my home.>> So their cigarette smoke reaches my home.It is very rude. >> Correct. And it is the root of comflict with neighbors.>>  And it is the root of conflict between neighbors.So I think manners is based on good neighbors. >> So I think good neighbors must have good manners.

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