Neighbors

2016-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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No one knows how does human relation develop in the future. The person who had been friends with me in the past can become enemies now. The converse is same. Truth is the most important thing in human relation. But people often forget it. I am working as a writer about 30 years. I have met a lot of people. Some people was friends with me, others was unfriendly to me. I decided not to meet with people who didn't fit anymore. But I see them again. I have no choice but to meet even if I don't want to see them. I regret that I would treat him well a little. Now I think I'll be friends with everyone. The more I have friendly neighbor, the better I have a social relation. There should be no enemies.

강사 첨삭

Hi there sir,

Everything you said was right on the money! Have you come across this American expression? Let\'s all be friends. It\'s easier to sleep at night because you have peace of mind. See you on Friday sir!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

No one knows how does human relation develop in the future.

>>No one knows how human relationship will develop in the future.

The person who had been friends with me in the past can become enemies now.

>>The people who had been my friends in the past can become my enemies now.

The converse is same.

>>The opposite could also happen.

Truth is the most important thing in human relation.

>> Being true is the most important thing in human relationships.

But people often forget it.

>>correct!

I am working as a writer about 30 years.

>>I have been working as a writer for about 30 years.

I have met a lot of people.

>>correct!

Some people was friends with me, others was unfriendly to me.

>>Some people were friendly to me, others were unfriendly.

I decided not to meet with people who didn\'t fit anymore.

>>I decided not to meet people who I wasn\'t comfortable with.

But I see them again.

>>correct!

I have no choice but to meet even if I don\'t want to see them.

>>I have no choice but to meet them even if I don\'t want to see them.

I regret that I would treat him well a little.

>>I regretted that I didn\'t treat them well.

Now I think I\'ll be friends with everyone.

>>correct!

The more I have friendly neighbor, the better I have a social relation.

>>The friendlier I am with my neighbor, the better is my social relationship.

There should be no enemies.

>>correct!

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