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If I can change myself
I want to change my face because I can’t try to change my face unlike body. It is not that I don\'t like my face. It\'s just my wish. While I can change my personality or character, I always care about my face.
3. Most of my neighbors are really kind. There are some people who do not say hello. Whenever I greet them I don’t feel great. Anyway, my neighbors sometimes give me some delicious food and present when they took the trip.
4. I probably have 10 people. There are no many students in my apartment so my parent’s usually close with them. However, there are some people who age is same with me. Also, one of them is my friend, so I hang out with her sometimes.
5. It depends on person\'s age, personality, and character. If someone is adult like my parents, it is quite hard to be my friend. And if someone\'s personality or character is not good, I think they should be just acquaintances.
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Nice idea dear! haha
>> If I can change myself, I want to change how my face looks like because I can’t try to change the way I look unlike body.
It is not that I don\'t like my face. It\'s just my wish.
>> Correct.
While I can change my personality or character, I always care about my face.
3. Most of my neighbors are really kind.
>> Correct.
>> Correct.
There are some people who do not say hello.
>> Correct.
Whenever I greet them I don’t feel great.
>> Correct.
Anyway, my neighbors sometimes give me some delicious food and present when they took the trip.
>> Anyway, my neighbors sometimes give me some delicious food and presents when they go on trips.
>> 4. I probably have 10 neighbors.
There are no many students in my apartment so my parent’s usually close with them.
>> We do not have a lot of students in my apartment, so my parent\'s are usually close to them.
However, there are some people who age is same with me.
>> However, there are those whose age is same as me.
Also, one of them is my friend, so I hang out with her sometimes.
5. It depends on person\'s age, personality, and character.
>> Correct.
>> 5. It depends on a person\'s age, personality, and character.
If someone is adult like my parents, it is quite hard to be my friend.
>> If a person is an adult like my parents, it is quite hard to be their friend.
And if someone\'s personality or character is not good, I think they should be just acquaintances.
>> Correct.
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