Neighbors
학생이 쓴 원문
If I can change my failure, when I was in ready to high school I want to change my mind. It is because I believed that I can pass the exam without practice but I failed the exam. So I learned always have to do my best.
6. They should talk each other. There are some people who maintain great relationship with neighbors but there are some people who do not. Also, to improve our neighborhood, people should protect their area. The reason why I thought that is that I sometimes see people who leave trash on table.
7. When it comes to advantages, we can be friend as talking about our daily lives and we can look after each other when we had urgent occasions. There are no many disadvantages. However, if I had many neighbors, my important things could not be done. It’s because I always meet them and then I hang out with them.
강사 첨삭
Take care on your trip my dear. Remember the tips I shared with you. :)
>> I would like to change my thinking when I was in high school.
It is because I believed that I can pass the exam without practice but I failed the exam.
>> It is because I believed that I can pass the exam without reviewing, but I was wrong. I failed the exam.
So I learned always have to do my best.
>> That is how I learned to always do the best I can.
6. They should talk each other.
>> They should talk to each other.
There are some people who maintain great relationship with neighbors but there are some people who do not.
>> There are some people who maintain great relationship with their neighbors but there are some people who do not.
Also, to improve our neighborhood, people should protect their area.
>> Also, to improve our neighborhood, people should protect their territory.
The reason why I thought that is that I sometimes see people who leave trash on table.
>> The reason why I think this way is because, I sometimes see people who leave trash on the table.
7. When it comes to advantages, we can be friend as talking about our daily lives and we can look after each other when we had urgent occasions.
>> 7. When it comes to advantages, we can be friends and talk about our daily lives. We can look after each other when we have urgent situations.
There are no many disadvantages.
>> We do not have a lot of disadvantages.
However, if I had many neighbors, my important things could not be done.
>> However, if I had many neighbors, important things on my plans might not be done.
It’s because I always meet them and then I hang out with them.
>> Correct.
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