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The Squid Game is one of the most famous movies in the world.
According to the \"New York Times\" , the movie has been thought
unhappy by North Korean Government because it depicts a fictional
game show that has deadly consequences. K-pop has become increasingly
popular in North Korea with tens of thousands of North Koreans having
access to it almost exclusively through the black market.
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Hi there [이름]!
It is great to read from you once again here on the composition page. Squid Game is a very meaningful drama. Not only that presents human nature to survive, but it also the reason why they need to. So with the 111 million people who watched it in the world, as well as all those who support K-pop, these are excellent forms of entertainment.
Kindly go over the explanations and suggestions I made below. This is a very good piece of writing. Keep it up!
See you in class soon.
-T. Donna =)
The Squid Game is one of the most famous movies in the world.
>> Squid Game is one of the most famous tv series in the world.
EXPLANATION: We do not need \"the\" before Squid Game as you can see in the original title, it doesn\'t have it. This is a very tricky rule in English. You have to memorize if you need to use it or not because there is always an exception to the rule.
According to the \"New York Times\" , the movie has been thought
unhappy by North Korean Government because it depicts a fictional
game show that has deadly consequences.
unhappy by North Korean Government because it depicts a fictional
game show that has deadly consequences.
>> Correct!
Or: ... by the North Korean Government...
EXPLANATION: We need \"the\" before North Korean Government to mean that it is a specific kind of government. Most countries\' governments need to have \"the\" for this pattern. For example: the South Korean government, the Vietnamese government,
K-pop has become increasingly
popular in North Korea with tens of thousands of North Koreans having
access to it almost exclusively through the black market.
popular in North Korea with tens of thousands of North Koreans having
access to it almost exclusively through the black market.
>> Correct!
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