Netizens' attack
학생이 쓴 원문
It turned out that a middle school teacher, who is 35 years old, had a sexual relationship with her student. So, netizens searched her private information such as her children's photos or her husband's occupation and uploded those things on Internet. In reaction to this behavior, there is a movement to refrain netizens from such cyber terror. In modern society, we have a judicial system. It means that if somebody breaks a law, they take the issue to the court and the judge or jurors try to figure out the guilty or innocent. Netizens don't have any rights to judge her and invading her private life is breaking the law. They should be sure to repect others' personal life.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
It's sad that some people like to prey on other people and like to show other people's bad points, but never give them credit when they do something good. Talk to you again tomorrow.
-RJ
It turned out that a middle school teacher, who is 35 years old, had a sexual relationship with her student. >>correct
So, netizens searched her private information such as her children's photos or her husband's occupation and uploded those things on Internet.
>>So, the netizens searched for her private information such as her children's photos or her husband's occupation and uploded those things on the Internet.
In reaction to this behavior, there is a movement to refrain netizens from such cyber terror.
>>correct
In modern society, we have a judicial system.
>>correct
It means that if somebody breaks a law, they take the issue to the court and the judge or jurors try to figure out the guilty or innocent.
>>It means that if somebody breaks the law, they take the issue to the court and the judge or jurors try to figure out who is guilty or innocent.
Netizens don't have any rights to judge her and invading her private life is breaking the law.
>>correct
They should be sure to repect others' personal life.
>>They should be sure to respect others personal life.
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