Never give away

2021-03-19 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Oh, what is it? Well, I can never give away my husband\'s love to another woman except mother-in-lower, hohoho. I don\'t think that whatever could never gove away things. Our generation says that there is nothing we don\'t understand to understand. So, in my thought of these days, I think I don\'t have it. I don\'t know about it in my situation in present. These days, I\'m trying to break free my desire for possession from everything.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ms. [Name]! I was surprised by your first answer. It felt like line in a Korean drama! ^^ I totally agree with you! i also agree with your last statement. I think we need always need to appreciate what we have.

~ Teacher Marie

Oh, what is it?

>> CORRECT.
Well, I can never give away my husband\'s love to another woman except mother-in-lower, hohoho.
>> Well, I can never give away my husband\'s love to another woman except my mother-in-law.

I don\'t think that whatever could never gove away things.

>> I cannot think of other things I can never give away.

Our generation says that there is nothing we don\'t understand to understand.
>> Our generation says that there is nothing we cannot understand.

So, in my thought of these days, I think I don\'t have it.
>> So, nowadays, I keep think about things I don\'t have.

I don\'t know about it in my situation in present.
>> I don\'t know much about it in my present situation.

These days, I\'m trying to break free my desire for possession from everything.

>> But, these days, I\'m trying to break free from my desire of possessing everything. 

OR: But, these days, I\'m trying to break free from my desire of having everything.

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