"Never, never give up"

We are sometimes motivated by the word "never give up". however sometimes we trapped that word, so we try too much to do something that we can't do. It is too stressful to bare it. We can't do whatever we want! Sometime we need just to let it go or give up. If someone not give up to do some work that he can't control, It is too burden for him to achieve it. Even he try and try again continuously, it makes him more feel depressed. So I think "never give up" all the works are not good.

Hello there [이름]! ^^   We discussed this question before, haven\'t we? ^^ Your answer was great then and it\'s even better now in this essay. ^^ Very good job. ^^ Here is a tip to writing good essays; try not to use repeated words.For example, in the first sentence, the word \"sometimes\" was used twice. It\'s better to use a synonym of it. Anyway, besides that, most of the corrections were scrubbing or giving minor alterations for better articulation. ^^   Excited to see you in class, ==Teacher Charlie==     We are sometimes motivated by the word \"never give up\". however sometimes we trapped that word, so we try too much to do something that we can\'t do. It is too stressful to bare it. >> Sometimes we are motivated with the phrase \"never give up\", however ,every so often we are trapped with that idea that we try too much to do something that is just not possible thus becoming too stressful to bare. We can\'t do whatever we want! Sometime we need just to let it go or give up. >> We have to accept that we can\'t do whatever we want and that sometimes we need to let go or give up.    If someone not give up to do some work that he can\'t control, It is too burden for him to achieve it. >> If someone doesn\'t give up on a task that is beyond his control, it becomes too burdensome for to achieve.   Even he try and try again continuously, it makes him more feel depressed. >> Though he tries and tries continuously, it would make him feel disheartened. So I think \"never give up\" all the works are not good. >> Therefore, I think that never giving up on anything is not good.