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New year is good to [이름]ging me better than me at last year. And i think important that is better than the past and i try to that.
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Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for submitting your homework.
I agree that New Year really symbolizes [이름]ge. [이름]ging for the better is the best way to do it.
You can do it, [이름]! ^^
~Teacher Gina
>> The New Year is a good opportunity for me to be better than last year.
And i think important that is better than the past and i try to that.
>> And I think that it\'s important to be a better person now that the past and I\'m trying to do that.
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