New attitude

2017-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Megan

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Yesterday, I moved to my seat because our division is changed positions that some transfer to each other. aside from that, there are some change in our office. Our division leader failed to renew his contract. It's expected as he totally has his way without any idea from his colleague and have little done his job as well. No one miss him sincerely when he left the office. it's really regrettable moment as his team member one time, but I felt same as other colleague. I decided to have new attitude suitable for a new seat. I cleaned up my seat and arrange documents in files. I divided each chemical item that I was asked from salesperson into in excel format. I can easily find the last content and remember what I did. our new employee will be in our team soon, I have to be a competitive one compared to other person.

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름]!!


It was a new beginning. Everything was going on greatly. Things suddenly became all new. It was a shock at first but then things started getting alright. Getting introduced to a new seat was another new beginning. Just keep doing what you think is right [이름]!! Good Luck!!


READING TIPS:

Read English texts as often as you can.

This could be the news, short stories or novels or texts from your textbook. Choose an interesting text that is not too difficult for you (otherwise it wouldn\'t be fun).


Don\'t look up every word which is new to you. Even without a dictionary you will understand a lot. Just concentrate on what you do understand and try to find out the rest by intelligent guessing. That works rather well, especially if you are interested in the topic. If you are a football fanatic for example, you probably won\'t have problems understanding an English text about football. On the other hand, someone who is better in English than you but not interested in football will have more problems understanding the same text.


~Teacher Megan~


Yesterday, I moved to my seat because our division is changed positions that some transfer to each other.

>> Yesterday, I moved to a new seat because our division is changing positions since some were transferred.


aside from that, there are some change in our office. Our division leader failed to renew his contract.

>> Aside from that, there were some changes in our office. Our division leader failed to renew his contract.


It\'s expected as he totally has his way without any idea from his colleague and have little done his job as well.

>> It\'s expected, as he secretly had his way out without giving any idea from his colleague and haven\'t done his job well.


 No one miss him sincerely when he left the office. it\'s really regrettable moment as his team member one time, but I felt same as other colleague.

>>  Nobody misses him since he left the office. It\'s a really regrettable moment as his previous team member, but I felt the same as my other colleagues.


I decided to have new attitude suitable for a new seat. I cleaned up my seat and arrange documents in files.

>> Correct.


I divided each chemical item that I was asked from salesperson into in excel format.

>> I divided each chemical items that I was asked by a salesperson into an excel format.


I can easily find the last content and remember what I did.

>> Correct.


 our new employee will be in our team soon, I have to be a competitive one compared to other person.

>>Our new employee will be joining our team soon, I have to be competitive compared to the other person.

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