New Class
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Looks like you\'ve made new friends today.
That is nice. Who is that friend who like baseball?
You should make friends with him. Maybe he can teach you a lot of things about baseball. :)
See you in our class. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Now I am 6th grade.
>> Now, I am in 6th grade.
Next year I have to go to the middle school.
>> Next year, I will go to the middle school.
Yesterday was first new 6th grade class.
>> Yesterday was my first day in my new 6th grade class.
I am 3rd class.The teacher is a little old.
>> In my third class, my teacher is a little old.
And I know some friends in my new classmate.
>> And, I know some of my friends in my new class.
They are kind.
>> Correct
But in the class one friend likes baseball.
>> But, in the other class there is a friend who likes baseball.
I am baseball fan.And it is a little boring.
>> I am a baseball fan but it is a little boring.
In my classmates likes to play card and cube.
>> My classmates like to play cards and cubes.
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