New Class

2016-03-03 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

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Now I am 6th grade.Next year I have to go to the middle school.Yesterday was first new 6th grade class.I am 3rd class.The teacher is a little old.And I know some friends in my new classmate.They are kind.But in the class one friend likes baseball.I am baseball fan.And it is a little boring.In my classmates likes to play card and cube.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^

Looks like you\'ve made new friends today.

That is nice. Who is that friend who like baseball?

You should make friends with him. Maybe he can teach you a lot of things about baseball. :)

See you in our class. :)


~~ Teacher Kris


Now I am 6th grade.

>> Now, I am in 6th grade.

Next year I have to go to the middle school.

>> Next year, I will go to the middle school.

Yesterday was first new 6th grade class.

>> Yesterday was my first day in my new 6th grade class.

I am 3rd class.The teacher is a little old.

>> In my third class, my teacher is a little old.

And I know some friends in my new classmate.

>> And, I know some of my friends in my new class.

They are kind.

>> Correct

But in the class one friend likes baseball.

>> But, in the other class there is a friend who likes baseball.

I am baseball fan.And it is a little boring.

>> I am a baseball fan but it is a little boring.

In my classmates likes to play card and cube.

>> My classmates like to play cards and cubes.

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