New club
학생이 쓴 원문
Today I chose a new club at school. Today was selecting a new club day. I chose a bowling club. I played bowling with my cousins when it is new year\'s day. I played it twice and it was really fun. So, I joined this club. The bowling ally is near my house and only third grades can assign this club.
강사 첨삭
Today I chose a new club at school.
>> Today, I chose a new club in school.
Today was selecting a new club day. I chose a bowling club.
>> Today was the selection of a new club and I chose bowling club.
I played bowling with my cousins when it is new year\'s day.
>> I played bowling with my cousins during New year\'s day.
I played it twice and it was really fun. So, I joined this club.
>> Correct
The bowling ally is near my house and only third grades can assign this club.
>> Correct
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