new english teacher
학생이 쓴 원문
Today, our school english teacher had changed because the original teacher was gone to china.
The new teacher's voice was really strange.
Her voice was like a person who drank helium.
Also, her voice was really small so about one third cannot hear her voice.
In addition, her english pronunciation was really bad so our class said.
" We need a new teacher"
Also, the original teacher said we can watch movie Ratatouille but the new teacher said we need to do class.
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강사 첨삭
Hi Kevin^^
Oh, what a change in the English class! Haha helium was a funny thing. Have the teacher undergo drug test. ^^ Just kidding. Well not every teacher could handle the class subjects for a long time for some reasons. I hope you'd have a good time with your new teacher though, as you go along. Here are some of the things you've got to study on:
T'Joan
Today, our school english teacher had changed because the original teacher was gone to china.
>>Today, our school English teacher had changed because the original teacher went to China. The new teacher's voice was really strange.
>>CORRECT!Her voice was like a person who drank helium.
>>Her voice was like that of a person who drank helium.Also, her voice was really small so about one third cannot hear her voice.
>>Her voice was also really soft so about one third of our class couldn't hear her voice.In addition, her english pronunciation was really bad so our class said.
" We need a new teacher"
>>In addition, her English pronunciation was really bad so our class said, " We need a new teacher."Also, the original teacher said we can watch movie Ratatouille but the new teacher said we need to do class.
>>The original teacher told us that we can watch the movie Ratatouille but the new teacher said "We need to have our class."
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