New friends
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
My Dear [이름],
It’s great that you’re making new friends! I’m glad that it makes you feel good having them..
Cherish every memory..
God bless,
T. Venus
Here are your corrections:
I made new friends.
>>CORRECT!
And, I played with my new friends!
>>CORRECT!
Two days ago, I warried about friends.
>>Two days ago, I was worried about my friends.
But today, I played with my friends.
>>I played with my friends today.
I'm very happy.
>>CORRECT!
I can play many times with my friends at school.
>>CORRECT!
I felt so good about I can play with my friends!!
>>It feels so good that I can play with my friends!!
I can make friends!
>>CORRECT!
Fighting!
>>CORRECT! Yes, Fighting…^^
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