new guy

2010-02-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jennifer

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good morning jenny~ In my company, I have some chance to meet foreigner. Among them, two man like to talk with me. even though my English is not good. They understand me and they always tell me speaking loudly is important to improve my English skills. and also gave me encorage too. Actually they aren't native speakers. Pantalis is came from Greek and Mr.radich came from Croatia. but they're English is good. Yesterday, Pantalis introduce to me new guy who came from Greek too. Pantalis told me "he's English is very good. so you can drop his office and practice you're English." I was great to meet new guy. his name is Mr.dimitrish.

강사 첨삭

[이름], I am very happy to read another composition from you. I guess you should try to make the most of your chances to be able to speak in English. I guess you’re lucky that you have people around you who are willing to help you in improving your English skills. Introducing you to Mr. [Name] is also one good opportunity to polish your skills, so don’t take it for granted. Try to have as much exposure in English as you can. I always have a great time during our class. I can’t wait to talk with you tomorrow! ^^ XOXO, Jenny Here is the correction: good morning jenny~ >> Good morning, Jenny. In my company, I have some chance to meet foreigner. >> In my company, I have some chances to meet foreigners. Among them, two man like to talk with me. >> Among them, two men talked to me. even though my English is not good. They understand me and they always tell me speaking loudly is important to improve my English skills. >>Even though my English is not good, they understand me and they always tell me to speak loudly in order for me to improve my English skills. and also gave me encorage too. >> They also give me some encouragements.  Actually they aren't native speakers. >>Actually, they aren’t native speakers. Pantalis is came from Greek and Mr.radich came from Croatia. >> Pantalis came from Greece and Mr. [Name] came from Croatia. but they're English is good. >>They are fluent in English though.  Yesterday, Pantalis introduce to me new guy who came from Greek too. >> Yesterday, Pantalis introduced me to this guy who came from Greece, too.  Pantalis told me "he's English is very good. so you can drop his office and practice you're English." >> Pantalis told me, “His English is very good so you can drop by his office and practice your English.”  I was great to meet new guy. his name is Mr.dimitrish. >> It was great meeting the new guy. His name is Mr. [Name].

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