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2021-03-09 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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Dear [Name], I am very happy with your lesson. I would like to have a Business English from today. Before your lesson, my teacher was Mr. [Name]. I learned the business talking #1 from him at that time. As you know, my weak point of English talking is a grammer and pronounciation. Sometimes, I didn\'t understand what you said, because your pronounciation was different from what I know. Thanks

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

See you later in our class ^^

T. DON

Dear [Name],

I am very happy with your lesson.

>> CORRECT

I would like to have a Business English from today.

>> I would like to have a Business English from today.

OR:

>> I would like to have a Business English in our class from today.

Before your lesson, my teacher was Mr. [Name]. I learned the business talking #1 from him at that time.

>> Before you became my teacher, my teacher was T. Jasper and I learned Business Talking #1 from him at that time.

As you know, my weak point of English talking is a grammer and pronounciation.

>> As you know, my weak points in English conversation are grammar and pronunciation.

Sometimes, I didn\'t understand what you said, because your pronounciation was different from what I know.

>> Sometimes, I didn\'t understand what you said because your pronunciation was different from others.

Thanks

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