New math academy

2016-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Today I moved my math academy. My new math academy was very small than my ancient math academy. But my math teacher was good to me. When I was untie the math question, my math teacher said, "You are very quit!" But I always quit in academy. And the president of my academy said,"Do you have any difficult question?" and I answerd "No, I don't." Because the questions is very easy to me!!! So I don't have any question to my president math theather. My class students are not bad but I think they are play on class time. And they also eat some gums,candys, and jellies. So I can't concentration my math question. But It was a good day of me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there baby, happy Monday!

How are you?
I hope you had a great weekend!
By the way, thank you so much for sending in this composition.

Solving Math problems is always difficult but I know you can always do that if you do your best...:)

Take care always and have a great day!

can\'t wait to hear your voice again later...

xoxoTeacher Cam^^

Today I moved my math academy.

>>I transferred to another Math academy today.

My new math academy was very small than my ancient math academy.

>>My new Math academy is very small compared to my previous Math academy.

But my math teacher was good to me.

>>correct

When I was untie the math question,my math teacher said, \"You are very quit!\"

>>When I was solving the Math questions, my teacher told me that I am very quiet.

But I always quit in academy.

>>But I am always quiet in the academy.

And the president of my academy said,\"Do you have any difficult question?\" and I answerd \"No, I don\'t.\"

>>The president of the class even asked me if I had some problems answering the questions, so I answered no.

Because the questions is very easy to me!!!

>>The questions were very easy!

So I don\'t have any question to my president math theather.
>>So I didn\'t have any questions to my Math teacher.
My class students are not bad but I think they are play on class time.

>>My classmates are not bad but I think they always play in our class.

And they also eat some gums,candys, and jellies.

>>They also eat some sweets while having the class.

So I can\'t concentration my math question.

>>That is why I can\'t concentrate on the questions.

But It was a good day of me.

>>But it was a good day for me.

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