New Math academy

2018-01-30 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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I went to new academy yesterday.It was not bad.I had a lesson for 1hour 30minutes.But it was not too long.I solved a lot of problems.And after finish class I rode my bike went to home.I hope sunday is coming soon.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I\'m happy to hear that you found a new Math academy.

I hope that you will learn a lot there.

Just enjoy studying in your new academy.

Don\'t worry, Sunday is near. ^^


_Teacher Dianne ^^


I went to new academy yesterday.

>> I went to the new academy yesterday.

It was not bad.

>> correct

I had a lesson for 1hour 30minutes.But it was not too long.

>> I had a lesson for 1 hour and 30 minutes, but it was not too long for me.

I solved a lot of problems.

>> correct

And after finish class I rode my bike went to home.I hope sunday is coming soon.

>> Then after I finished the class, I rode my bike going home. I hope Sunday is coming soon.

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