New people
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강사 첨삭
Jay,
For most people, it\'s hard to break the ice when meeting new people. I envy people who can easily make friends.
~Lynn
When I was younger, I like meeting new people at the drinking party.
>> When I was younger, I liked meeting new people at drinking parties.
The first of all, finding common things between us is good to start talking.
>> Finding what we have in common is a good way to start the conversation.
So, I usually used to ask about their hobbies and try to find something to talk about.
>> correct!
Also, when I had a plan to meet new people, I went there with my friends.
>> correct!
It was a good way to approach someone without awkward atmosphere.
>> correct!
I usually talk to other people better, if there are someone who I know.
>> I usually talk to other people better if I\'m with someone I know.
But this is the past.
>> But this is in the past.
Now, I like having a good time with my firends more than meeting new people.
>> correct!
After my military obligation, I felt that there are few people around me, and also I didn\'t keep touch with pepole not much familiar.
>> After my military obligation, I felt that there are few people around me, and also I didn\'t keep in touch with people I wasn\'t close with.
I think it is important to take care of people who are already around me.
>> correct!
I don\'t want to waste my time for making new friends.
>> I don\'t want to waste my time making new friends.
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