New people

2019-02-01 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was younger, I like meeting new people at the drinking party. The first of all, finding common things between us is good to start talking. So, I usually used to ask about their hobbies and try to find something to talk about. Also, when I had a plan to meet new people, I went there with my friends. It was a good way to approach someone without awkward atmosphere. I usually talk to other people better, if there are someone who I know. But this is the past. Now, I like having a good time with my firends more than meeting new people. After my military obligation, I felt that there are few people around me, and also I didn\'t keep touch with pepole not much familiar. I think it is important to take care of people who is already around me. I don\'t want to waste my time for making new friends.

강사 첨삭

Jay,

For most people, it\'s hard to break the ice when meeting new people. I envy people who can easily make friends.

~Lynn

When I was younger, I like meeting new people at the drinking party.

>> When I was younger, I liked meeting new people at drinking parties.

The first of all, finding common things between us is good to start talking.

>> Finding what we have in common is a good way to start the conversation.

So, I usually used to ask about their hobbies and try to find something to talk about.

>> correct!

Also, when I had a plan to meet new people, I went there with my friends.

>> correct!

It was a good way to approach someone without  awkward atmosphere.

>> correct!

I usually talk to other people better, if there are someone who I know. 

>> I usually talk to other people better if I\'m with someone I know.

But this is the past.

>> But this is in the past.

Now, I like having a good time with my firends more than meeting new people.

>> correct!

After my military obligation, I felt that there are few people around me, and also I didn\'t keep touch with pepole not much familiar.

>> After my military obligation, I felt that there are few people around me, and also I didn\'t keep in touch with people I wasn\'t close with.

 I think it is important to take care of people who are already around me.

>> correct!

I don\'t want to waste my time for making new friends.

>> I don\'t want to waste my time making new friends.

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