New restaurant

Hey there, Ben!^.^

Thank you for answering your homework!^.^

You explained your ideas well but there were some sentences which contained confusing words.

Please check the correction that I made and also the vocabulary that I made use in some sentences.

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~~Teacher Erine~~

It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built
in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why?
I would like to support that plan.

>>Correct.

or>>I would be supporting that plan.

Now days, life style of people is changing so fast compared to past, so the number of people do not want to make the cuisine on their own or cater for the

family at the evening of the weekend.

>>Nowadays, the lifestyle of the people is changing so fast compared to the past. So the people do not want to make the cuisine/dish on their own and just cater

for the family in the evening on weekends.
 There are benefits to have a new restaurant nearby my house.

>>Correct.
 First, it is easy to approach the restaurant for tasting variety foods.

>>First, it is easy to approach/visit the restaurant to taste variety of foods.

You are willing to get there wherever you want to.

>>Correct.

or>>You can easily get there wherever you want to.
Second, Lots of restaurants suppliers could make a competition among them, So we can be supplied food low cost with high quality.

>>Second, lots of restaurants are competing with one another so we can be supplied with food at a low cost with a high quality/credibility.

it\'s a market principle of Capitalism.

>>It\'s a market principle of Capitalism.
 But restaurants owner would always keep in mind and strive that it need to have professionalism and great recipe to satisfy customers.

>>But the restaurants owner would always keep that in mind and strive harder to have achieve professionalism and great recipes to satisfy their customers.