New School
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for telling me about your first day in school.
Well, about your teacher, I think that is just fine.
It\'s actually good to be strict sometimes for the students to learn more and to respect the teacher.
I think I will also be strict in class. What do you think? ^^
See you on Tuesday!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Today was first day of middle school.
>> Today was the first day of going to the middle school.
I\'m 1-2 7th student.
>> correct
My teacher will teach us society.
>> correct
>> or: My teacher will teach us the subject Society.
>> or: My teacher will teach us about the society.
My school is really old.So,the building\'s structure is 20th century.
>> My school is really old so the building\'s structure is in the 20th century.
It has baseball stadium in front of middle school.
>> It has a baseball stadium in front of the middle school.
My friend will be 22.
>> correct
The teacher said sometimes he will strict but sometimes he will kind.
>> The teacher said that sometimes he will be strict and sometimes he will be kind.
And study will be start tommorrow.
>> And we will start studying tomorrow.
Schoolbook looks really funny and a little uncomfortable to run.
>> The schoolbook looks really funny and a little uncomfortable to run.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.