New School rules
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I think that this is a good idea for the students to behave.
It will be a great help to the less fortunate as well.
Be a good boy, okay? ^^
Have a good night!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Today at school,students and teacher talked about donating.
>> Today at school, the students and the teacher talked about donating.
We should donate poor people.So,we talked about how to donate them.And the result was there is a panalty if we said bad words and late at school.
>> We should donate to poor people, so we talked about how to donate or give something to them and we have decided to pay a penalty if we say or speak bad words or if we come to school late.
If we said bad words to friends 100cents and if we lat at school there is a penalty for per 1minute 100cents.It wil be horrible rules.
>> If we said bad words to our friends, 100 cents and if we are late for school there is a penalty of 100 cents for 1 minute. It will be horrible rules.
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