New two skills which I wish to acquire.
학생이 쓴 원문
I wish to acquire two genius skills which one is having good memory, the other is keen insight.
If I could memorize on the view, I wouldn't try to do anything.
I'm always jealous of a person who is good at memorizing because I'm so absent-minded that I'm not good at memorizing.
And I wish to see overleaf of other people that's why I wish to gain the skill.
Maybe It's due to have interested in Psychology to me.
If I had two ability, I could live my life easily and spectacular.
These days It's too bored for me.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]^^
I wonder why you are bored?
I was smiling while reading your homework because your wish is the same with my friend.
He wants to have ood memory because he has become a senile.^^
Make sure that your sentences are using the proper tenses. Your sentences express your emotions
and that\'s a great way to speak your mind.
Keep it up.
Take care^^
T.Debby^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I wish to acquire two genius skills which one is having good memory, the other is keen insight.
>> CORRECT
OR> I wish to have great skills in memory and eye-sight.If I could memorize on the view, I wouldn\'t try to do anything.
>> If I could memorize just by looking, I wouldn\'t try to do anything.I\'m always jealous of a person who is good at memorizing because I\'m so absent-minded that I\'m not good at memorizing.
>> CORRECT
OR> I always envy people that have good memory because I don\'t have it.And I wish to see overleaf of other people that\'s why I wish to gain the skill.
>> And I wish to see other side of other people\'s personality that\'s why I wish to gain this skill.Maybe It\'s due to have interested in Psychology to me.>> Maybe it has something to do with my interest in Psychology.If I had two ability, I could live my life easily and spectacular.
>> If I had two abilities, I could live my life easier and more spectacular.These days It\'s too bored for me.
>> These days, I\'m too bored.
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