New two skills which I wish to acquire.

2014-05-16 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

학생이 쓴 원문

I wish to acquire two genius skills which one is having good memory, the other is keen insight. If I could memorize on the view, I wouldn't try to do anything. I'm always jealous of a person who is good at memorizing because I'm so absent-minded that I'm not good at memorizing. And I wish to see overleaf of other people that's why I wish to gain the skill. Maybe It's due to have interested in Psychology to me. If I had two ability, I could live my life easily and spectacular. These days It's too bored for me.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]^^   I wonder why you are bored? I was smiling while reading your homework because your wish is the same with my friend. He wants to have ood memory because he has become a senile.^^   Make sure that your sentences are using the proper tenses. Your sentences express your emotions and that\'s a great way to speak your mind.   Keep it up.   Take care^^   T.Debby^^   Here are my corrections for you:   I wish to acquire two genius skills which one is having good memory, the other is keen insight. >> CORRECT OR> I wish to have great skills in memory and eye-sight.If I could memorize on the view, I wouldn\'t try to do anything. >> If I could memorize just by looking, I wouldn\'t try to do anything.I\'m always jealous of a person who is good at memorizing because I\'m so absent-minded that I\'m not good at memorizing. >> CORRECT OR> I always envy people that have good memory because I don\'t have it.And I wish to see overleaf of other people that\'s why I wish to gain the skill. >> And I wish to see other side of other people\'s personality that\'s why I wish to gain this skill.Maybe It\'s due to have interested in Psychology to me.>> Maybe it has something to do with my interest in Psychology.If I had two ability, I could live my life easily and spectacular. >> If I had two abilities, I could live my life easier and more spectacular.These days It\'s too bored for me. >> These days, I\'m too bored.

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