New watch

2018-04-17 · 첨삭 강사 Brian

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I bought a new watch.It is really expensive watch.But it is too big too me.So,I will go to watch room and fit me up.New watch style is really good. I want to go school and church and show off my watch.

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I bought a new watch.

>>CORRECT

It is really expensive watch.

>>It is really an expensive watch

OR::

>>It is really expensive

But it is too big too me.So,I will go to watch room and fit me up

>> But it\'s too big for me so I will go to the watch shop and will have it adjusted to fit into my wrist

New watch style is really good.

>>My new watch looks really good

I want to go school and church and show off my watch.

>>CORRECT


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