New watch
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I bought a new watch.It is really expensive watch.But it is too big too me.So,I will go to watch room and fit me up.New watch style is really good. I want to go school and church and show off my watch.
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I bought a new watch.
>>CORRECT
It is really expensive watch.
>>It is really an expensive watch
OR::
>>It is really expensive
But it is too big too me.So,I will go to watch room and fit me up
>> But it\'s too big for me so I will go to the watch shop and will have it adjusted to fit into my wrist
New watch style is really good.
>>My new watch looks really good
I want to go school and church and show off my watch.
>>CORRECT
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