new year
학생이 쓴 원문
The new year has begun
As I am over 50 years old, I pray that the current is maintained like families, health and my work.
I don\'t have big dreams because I think realistic possibilities is more important than vain hope.
Even now I have a lot of work to do and enjoying my life.
강사 첨삭
Happy New Year Ma\'am! Great to read some of your thoughts. May you continue to find the joy of learning English this 2022.
~T. Aki :)
The new year has begun.
>>> CORRECT!
As I am over 50 years old, I pray that the current is maintained like families, health and my work.
>>> As I am over 50 years old, I pray that the current status of my family, health, and work is maintained.
I don\'t have big dreams because I think realistic possibilities is more important than vain hope.
>>> I don\'t have big dreams because I think realistic possibilities are more important than vain hope.
Even now I have a lot of work to do and enjoying my life.
>>> Even now I have a lot of work to do and enjoy my life.
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