New Year

2017-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Sunday was a New Year.I have to learn math hard.Yesterday I studied math really hard.Teacher gave me too much homework.And sick and tired of solving math questions.Math makes me not to play outside.It is New Year of the chicken.Korean usually eat rice stew that day.I will go to the middle school.Middle school will be wonderful.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I think solving Math problems is easy to you.

Because I know you\'re a Math wizard. ^_^

Just be cool, you can do it.

You need to study Math because you will take that until you go to University. ^^

You can play after doing your homework.

Just look forward to your Middle School. ^^

Aja!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


Sunday was a New Year.

>> It was New Year on Sunday.

I have to learn math hard.Yesterday I studied math really hard.

>> I have to learn math hard so I studied math really hard yesterday.

Teacher gave me too much homework.And sick and tired of solving math questions.

>> The teacher gave me too much homework and I\'m sick and tired of solving math questions.

Math makes me not to play outside.

>> Studying Math makes me not to play outside.

It is New Year of the chicken.Korean usually eat rice stew that day.

>> It is the year of the rooster and Koreans usually eat rice stew on that day.

I will go to the middle school.Middle school will be wonderful.

>> I will go to the middle school soon and it will be wonderful.

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