New Year

2018-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

New Year's day,I went to church.And I played baseball at the golf stadium.And I played clesh royal.After I went to home,I slept for 2hours and took a shower and sleep.It was too boring day.And today I woke up early than usual.Today was my mother's first working day.I had a stomach and I hurt my fingers so,I didn't had lunch.But I watched drama.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It\'s actually good that you went to church.

It means that you prayed for the things that you want to achieve this year.

I think you had a relaxing New Year. ^^

See you on Thursday! Good night!


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


New Year\'s day,I went to church.

>> I went to church on New Year\'s Day.

And I played baseball at the golf stadium.And I played clesh royal.

>> I played baseball at the golf stadium and played Clash Royale after.

After I went to home,I slept for 2hours and took a shower and sleep.

>> Then I went home. I slept for 2 hours and took a shower when I got up then I slept again.

It was too boring day.

>> It was too boring for me.

>> or: It was a boring day for me.

And today I woke up early than usual.

>> And today, I woke up earlier than the usual.

Today was my mother\'s first working day.

>> correct

I had a stomach and I hurt my fingers so,I didn\'t had lunch.But I watched drama.

>> I had a stomachache and I hurt my fingers too, so, I didn\'t have lunch, but I watched a drama.

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