New Year
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It\'s actually good that you went to church.
It means that you prayed for the things that you want to achieve this year.
I think you had a relaxing New Year. ^^
See you on Thursday! Good night!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
New Year\'s day,I went to church.
>> I went to church on New Year\'s Day.
And I played baseball at the golf stadium.And I played clesh royal.
>> I played baseball at the golf stadium and played Clash Royale after.
After I went to home,I slept for 2hours and took a shower and sleep.
>> Then I went home. I slept for 2 hours and took a shower when I got up then I slept again.
It was too boring day.
>> It was too boring for me.
>> or: It was a boring day for me.
And today I woke up early than usual.
>> And today, I woke up earlier than the usual.
Today was my mother\'s first working day.
>> correct
I had a stomach and I hurt my fingers so,I didn\'t had lunch.But I watched drama.
>> I had a stomachache and I hurt my fingers too, so, I didn\'t have lunch, but I watched a drama.
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