New Year's at grandparent's house.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
It was nice to know you enjoyed playing last holiday.
I hope that you can play again with your cousins.
And do better to win over them. ^^
See you on Thursday!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
I went to my grandparent\'s house.
>> correct
It was pretty nice.
>> correct
I played bowling and baseball.
>> correct
Bowling was really excited.
>> Bowling is really exciting.
I scored 2 strike.But I lose the game with my cousins.
>> I scored 2 strikes, but I lost the game against my cousins.
Hitting baseball at the baseball machine is really hard.And I scored 110points.
>> Hitting the ball in the baseball machine is really hard, but I scored 110points.
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