New Year's at grandparent's house.

2018-02-20 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

I went to my grandparent's house.It was pretty nice.I played bowling and baseball.Bowling was really excited.I scored 2 strike.But I lose the game with my cousins.Hitting baseball at the baseball machine is really hard.And I scored 110points.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


It was nice to know you enjoyed playing last holiday.

I hope that you can play again with your cousins.

And do better to win over them. ^^

See you on Thursday!


_Teacher Dianne ^^


I went to my grandparent\'s house.

>> correct

It was pretty nice.

>> correct

I played bowling and baseball.

>> correct

Bowling was really excited.

>> Bowling is really exciting.

I scored 2 strike.But I lose the game with my cousins.

>> I scored 2 strikes, but I lost the game against my cousins.

Hitting baseball at the baseball machine is really hard.And I scored 110points.

>> Hitting the ball in the baseball machine is really hard, but I scored 110points.

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