New Year\'s day

2019-02-07 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

학생이 쓴 원문

2019New year\'s holiday was past . It was 5days but really short day for many people. I went to both side of my grandparent\'s house. On sunday I went to my mother side\'s grandmother\'s house by my aunt\'s car. And I solved a math problem with my aunt and I played with my younger cousins. And next day I go out and played baseball alone. But suddenly I lost how to go my grandmother house back. I asked to lend phone to a grandfather and my uncle went to find me. Then, I went to my fatherside grandparent\'s house with my mother. First day, I just watched TV and next day my cousins came. So, we went to bowling alley and played basketball and soccer and sang.

강사 첨삭

2019New year\'s holiday was past . It was 5days but really short day for many people.

>> 2019 New year holiday has past. It was five days but felt really short for most people.

I went to both side of my grandparent\'s house.

>> I went to my grandparents on both sides.

On sunday I went to my mother side\'s grandmother\'s house by my aunt\'s car.

>> On Sunday, I went to my grandmother\'s house on my mother\'s side through my aunt\'s car.

And I solved a math problem with my aunt and I played with my younger cousins.

>>  I solved Math problems with my aunt and played with my younger cousins.

And next day I go out and played baseball alone. But suddenly I lost how to go my grandmother house back.

>> The next day, I went out and played basketball alone. But then, I lost track of the way back to my grandmother\'s house.

I asked to lend phone to a grandfather and my uncle went to find me.

>> I asked a grandfather to lend me a phone and my uncle came to find me.

Then, I went to my fatherside grandparent\'s house with my mother.

>> I also went to my grandparent\'s house on my father side with my mother.

First day, I just watched TV and next day my cousins came.

>> On the first day, I just watched TV and the next day, my cousins\' came.

So, we went to bowling alley and played basketball and soccer and sang.

>> Correct

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