New Year\'s day
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
2019New year\'s holiday was past . It was 5days but really short day for many people.
>> 2019 New year holiday has past. It was five days but felt really short for most people.
I went to both side of my grandparent\'s house.
>> I went to my grandparents on both sides.
On sunday I went to my mother side\'s grandmother\'s house by my aunt\'s car.
>> On Sunday, I went to my grandmother\'s house on my mother\'s side through my aunt\'s car.
And I solved a math problem with my aunt and I played with my younger cousins.
>> I solved Math problems with my aunt and played with my younger cousins.
And next day I go out and played baseball alone. But suddenly I lost how to go my grandmother house back.
>> The next day, I went out and played basketball alone. But then, I lost track of the way back to my grandmother\'s house.
I asked to lend phone to a grandfather and my uncle went to find me.
>> I asked a grandfather to lend me a phone and my uncle came to find me.
Then, I went to my fatherside grandparent\'s house with my mother.
>> I also went to my grandparent\'s house on my father side with my mother.
First day, I just watched TV and next day my cousins came.
>> On the first day, I just watched TV and the next day, my cousins\' came.
So, we went to bowling alley and played basketball and soccer and sang.
>> Correct
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