New year\'s holiday is coming.

2019-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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Next week is new year\'s day. I will visit my both grandparent\'s house. My origin schedule was go to a movie and go to church and visit one grandparent\'s house but I changed my schedule to go bot my grandparent\'s house. After holiday\'s I have to go to school just four days. And after going school four days it will be a spring vacation. I have to do something for my new semester.

강사 첨삭

Next week is New year\'s day.

>> Correct

or

>> Next week is our New Year\'s day.

I will visit my both grandparent\'s house.

>> I will visit both my grandparent\'s house.

My origin schedule was go to a movie and go to church and visit one grandparent\'s house but I changed my schedule to go bot my grandparent\'s house.

>> My original schedule was to go to the movie theater, go to church and visit one of my grandparent\'s house. But I changed my schedule/plan to visit both my grandparents\' house.

After holiday\'s I have to go to school just four days. And after going school four days it will be a spring vacation.

>> After the holidays, I have to go back to school just for four days. After four school days, it will be spring vacation.

I have to do something for my new semester.

>> Correct

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