New year\'s resolution
학생이 쓴 원문
In this coming New Year,
I want to get a good habit of studying English.
In other words, I will listen to, read and write in English step by step every day.
There is another thing that I want to change.
It is just that I have more mercy on than this year.
I don\'t do What I desire something, but I want to do what the other person wants something.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
It\'s been a while since I read your work.
I\'m glad you wrote something today.
I hope you can be consistent in your writing.
I\'ll see you on Thursday!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In this coming New Year, I want to get a good habit of studying English.
>> In this coming New Year, I want to develop a good habit of studying English.
In other words, I will listen to, read and write in English step by step every day.
In other words, I will listen to, read and write in English step by step every day.
>> Correct
There is another thing that I want to change.
There is another thing that I want to change.
>> Correct
It is just that I have more mercy on than this year.
It is just that I have more mercy on than this year.
>> I want to be more selfless this year.
I don\'t do What I desire something, but I want to do what the other person wants something.
I don\'t do What I desire something, but I want to do what the other person wants something.
>> I want to think about what others want more than what I want.
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