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Hi, [이름]!
Indeed, if AI will be more developed and robots can replace humans, there will be lesser jobs for the people.
I think that is a worrisome problem.
Everyone wants to show their great skills when it comes to AI or inventions.
I hope you can also do your research and invent something that is out of the box.
Good luck! I know you can do it!
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Summary: The tech of UK is a pioneer of AI and is at the forefront of the development of AI. But many experts were worried about a small British presence at the event compared with other countries such as French which sent almost five times more tech firms than those of UK.
>> Summary: The tech of UK is a pioneer of AI and is at the forefront of the development of AI. But many experts were worried about a small British presence at the event and they compared with other countries such as France that sent almost five times more tech firms than those of UK.
1.The suggestion of this news is many countries are very interested in promising AI and how much invisible effort is needed to AI and how much many countries will develop and invest in AI.
>> 1. The suggestion of this news is that many countries are very interested in promising AI and how much invisible effort is needed to AI and how many countries will be developed and invest in AI.
2.I know well of this field because this kind of field is my major. In the future,If i want to be survived in the world,I should prepare and study on AI tech.
>> 2. I know well of this field because this kind of field is my major. If I want to survive in the future, I should prepare and study on AI tech.
3.Ticket office and financial managing which are people do were changed people to AI.It is a AI tech with the skills replacing people\'s ability to work that leave many people jobless. But still this is the beginnig step of AI and we are in the change of the digital era. So I think the more scientists develop the AI the more people\'s job will be decreased.
>> 3. The ticket and financial managing offices are involve in changing people to AI. It is the AI tech with the skills of replacing people\'s ability to work that leave many people jobless. But still this is the beginnig step of AI and we are in the developing stage of the digital era. So I think the more scientists develop the AI ,the more people\'s job will be decreased.
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