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The useful information I get from this article is which cloths I have to wear,

>> The useful information I learned from this article is which clothes I have to wear

how to use suncream and the relation between Vitamin D and weight.
>> next is on how to use sun cream and the relation between Vitamin D and weight
In the sunshine or sunny day, I should wear a wide-brimmed hat and a long sleeved clothes to keep direct sunlight off my skin.

>> during sunny day I should wear a wide-brimmed hat and long sleeves to keep my skin from direct contact to the sunlight

In Korea, the weather is good but has a wide daily temperature range so I wear long shirts in the evening.
>> In Korea the weather is good but  it has a wide range of daily temperature so I wear long shirts in the evening
When I went to swim on afternoon, I didn\'t use suncream because It is so sticky.
>> when I go swimming in the afternoon, I don\'t use sun cream because it feels so sticky
But after reading this article, I have the idea of the importance of suncream and rick of skin cancer.
>> but after reading this article I now have the idea of how Important sun cream is and how it can prevent skin cancer.
By using suncream, I should be kept out of direct sunlight also I should wear long clothes.
>> By using sun cream and wearing long sleeves I could keep my skin from being exposed directly to the sun
It is hard to wear in sunny day, but rather I use stick suncream.
>> It is uncomfortable during sunny day but I prefer it than using sticky sun cream
summary.
>> Summary
The summary of this article is that we should aware of the fact that sunlight can cause risk of skin cancer and wrinkles and several simple steps to avoid sunlight and the benefits of vitamin D which can be only be obtained in direct sunlight.

>> The summary of this article is that we should be aware of the fact that the sunlight can cause skin diseases and there are several alternatives to avoid direct contact of our skin to the sunlight.