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According to Stastistics Korea, the figures of employment have sharply increased in February this year compared to that of January last year.

However, people in 60s have largely contributed to the surge in this stastistics so we cannot surely conclude that more people have been employed in Korea.

>> Spelling STATISTICS

Furthermore, the jobs taken by mostly 60s are temporay and low-paid.

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The Korean government seemed buoyed by the increased number in employment,

>> The Korean government seemed buoyed by the increased rate of employment,

but those jobs are created by the government with tax payer\'s money not by the market itself.

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So they won\'t last long enough for Korea to main such numbers high.

>> So they won\'t last long enough for Korea to mainTAIN such numbers high.