Next day

Next day was shopping day. We visited Deoksugung and Seoul square. The remain schedule are shopping center but we tired through the day before. We looked around the three shopping center cursorily. It would be pleased to shopping if I did not tired. My younger sister leave for city in her school. My older sister and me came back home. My feet are puffed up. This trip was tired but it would be helpful for next trip.

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Hi there Lindsay! Aww. Too bad your second day was kinda ruined because you were exhausted from the previous day. But at least you were still able to look around some shops. I love shopping too. I always make sure that I have lots of energy though so that I can fully enjoy the shopping experience. ^__^ Especially when I뭢 shopping in a new place. Well, I hope you can enjoy it next time. See you!

=T.Marie=

Next day

>> correct

Next day was shopping day.

>>correct
We visited Deoksugung and Seoul square.

>> correct
The remain schedule are shopping center but we tired through the day before.

>> The remaining schedule was supposed to be for shopping but we were tired from the previous day.
We looked around the three shopping center cursorily.

>> We looked around three shopping centers hastily.

** You can just use simple words like hastily or quickly instead of the not-so-common term 멵ursorily