Next girl friend
학생이 쓴 원문
I am looking for a right person. I hope she has a good and strong mind and enjoy exercise especially running. And she doesn\'t smoke and have any tattoos. She is not entirety and fat or chubby.
강사 첨삭
Good morning once again, Thomas!
Our subjective preference of a lover is natural. We always want a reflection of ourselves. This way, we have many things to talk about and share with each other. I am positive that you will meet the person you have stated below. After all, we know what we truly deserve.
Thank you for sending me this answer. Please read my suggestions intently.
Well done! See you then.
-T. Donna~
>> I am looking for the right person.
I hope she has a good and strong mind and enjoy exercise especially running.
>> I hope she has a good and strong mind and enjoys exercise especially running.
And she doesn\'t smoke and have any tattoos.
>> Correct!
Or: And I hope that she doesn\'t smoke and have any tattoos.
She is not entirety and fat or chubby.
>> Correct!
Or: She is not an entirety, fat, or chubby.
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