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Hi [이름]!
Thanks for sending me another composition. Here are my corrections:
This is my answer for lesson 38.
>>CORRECT
please check this.
>>CORRECT
I'm goning to go to Hong-kong.
>>I am going to go to Hong Kong.
I've been to China twice,but I've never been to Hong-kong.
>>CORRECT
I heard that the Christmas decorations of Hong-kong city is beautiful.
>>I heard that the Christmas decorations of Hong Kong City are beautiful.
I know many different places are better than Hong-kong for Christmas.
>>I know many different places are better than Hong Kong during Christmas.
But it is quite close,so maybe I can enjoy Christmastime in Hong-kong.
>>CORRECT [Separate the Christmas and time]
Also,I would like to go shopping in Hong-kong.
>>CORRECT [Note: Hong Kong]
I heard shopping there is interesting and prices are reasonable.
>>I heard shopping there is interesting and the prices are reasonable.
I planned to go there on Chistmas someday.
>>I plan to go there on Christmas, someday.
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