nice to meet you
학생이 쓴 원문
hi~ my teacher mira.
today is starting my first class.
I'm so pleasure meet you~ ^^
I'll do my best take a class.
Have a nive evening!
today is rainning day. (I like the rainning days!)
my mom and me went to the computer shoppingmall.
Because my computer was brokedown the day before yesterday.
We're arrived mall
Many camputer was displyed in a shopping mall.
employee was explain computer for me.
i'm decided one of the computer and mom was bought it.
new computer was made me a happy!
강사 첨삭
Hi Emily! I am also pleased to meet you. And I will do my best to teach you everything you need to know. If you have any questions, or didn\'t understand something, feel free to tell me, I am here to help you with all that I can. We will work together to achieve your goals.
T. Mira
hi~ my teacher mira.
>>Hi! Teacher Mira.
>> Hi, my teacher Mira!today is starting my first class.
>>Today is the start of my first class.
>> Today I started my first class.I\'m so pleasure meet you~ ^^
>>I\'m so pleased to meet you.
>> It\'s a pleasure to meet you.I\'ll do my best take a class.
>>I\'ll do my best to take the class.Have a nive evening!
>> Correct.today is rainning day. (I like the rainning days!)
>> Today was a rainy day. (I like rainy days!)
>> Today, it was raining.(I like rainy days!)my mom and me went to the computer shoppingmall.
>>My mom and me went to the computer shopping mall.
>> My mom and I went to the computer shopping mall.Because my computer was brokedown the day before yesterday.
>> Because my computer has broken down the day before yesterday.We\'re arrived mall Many camputer was displyed in a shopping mall.
>>When we\'ve arrived at the mall there many computers on display. employee was explain computer for me.
>> The employee explained to me about the computers.i\'m decided one of the computer and mom was bought it.
>>I decided on one of the computers and mom bought it.new computer was made me a happy!
>>My new computer made me happy!
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