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2010-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Joanna

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Good evening ,Joanna!! Nice to meet you and thank for class During the weekend,I have reviewed my phone class by the mp3 file recorded on last Friday. I found that I heard you "often" but I misunderstood that word as " orphan" I'm afraid due to lack of prewiewing and reading the manual. But i'm very please to learn about new setence " it on tip of my tongue!! ha ha thank you very much!! I want to write this kind of message often as it take your class Because I hope that you want to proofread the any lapse or mistakes if there any mistake in this sentence of message. Have a nice weekend, and see you on monday!!

강사 첨삭

Hi, Martin!^^ I’m so glad you are enjoying our lessons. I told you, if you have fun learning English, it will be easier for you to practice the language. Yes, you can leave messages in this corner. ^^ Kwenchenayo!^^     Nice to meet you >>>correct Good evening ,Joanna!! Nice to meet you and thank for class. >>>Good evening, Joanna!! Nice to meet you and thank you for the class. During the weekend,I have reviewed my phone class by the mp3 file recorded on last Friday. >>>During the weekend, I reviewed my phone class through the recorded mp3 file that I downloaded last Friday. I found that I heard you "often" but I misunderstood that word as " orphan" >>>I found out that I misunderstood the word “often” instead of “orphan”.  I'm afraid due to lack of prewiewing and reading the manual. >>>I’m afraid it might be the cause of not reading or previewing the manual ahead. But i'm very please to learn about new setence " it on tip of my tongue!!  >>>Nevertheless, I’m very pleased to learn about a new expression, “IT’S ON THE TIP OF MY TONGUE’. ha ha thank you very much!! I want to write this kind of message often as it take your class  >>>Hahaha! Thank you very much!! I want to keep on leaving messages in this page. Because I hope that you want to proofread the any lapse or mistakes if there any mistake in this sentence of message. >>>Because I am expecting you to proofread any mistakes in my composition. Have a nice weekend and I’ll see you on Monday!      

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