nice to meet you
학생이 쓴 원문
Good evening ,Joanna!! Nice to meet you and thank for class
During the weekend,I have reviewed my phone class by the mp3 file recorded on last Friday.
I found that I heard you "often" but I misunderstood that word as " orphan"
I'm afraid due to lack of prewiewing and reading the manual.
But i'm very please to learn about new setence " it on tip of my tongue!!
ha ha thank you very much!! I want to write this kind of message often as it take your class
Because I hope that you want to proofread the any lapse or mistakes if there any mistake in this sentence of message.
Have a nice weekend, and see you on monday!!
강사 첨삭
Hi, Martin!^^
I’m so glad you are enjoying our lessons. I told you, if you have fun learning English, it will be easier for you to practice the language. Yes, you can leave messages in this corner. ^^ Kwenchenayo!^^
Nice to meet you
>>>correct
Good evening ,Joanna!! Nice to meet you and thank for class.
>>>Good evening, Joanna!! Nice to meet you and thank you for the class.
During the weekend,I have reviewed my phone class by the mp3 file recorded on last Friday.
>>>During the weekend, I reviewed my phone class through the recorded mp3 file that I downloaded last Friday.
I found that I heard you "often" but I misunderstood that word as " orphan"
>>>I found out that I misunderstood the word “often” instead of “orphan”.
I'm afraid due to lack of prewiewing and reading the manual.
>>>I’m afraid it might be the cause of not reading or previewing the manual ahead.
But i'm very please to learn about new setence " it on tip of my tongue!!
>>>Nevertheless, I’m very pleased to learn about a new expression, “IT’S ON THE TIP OF MY TONGUE’.
ha ha thank you very much!! I want to write this kind of message often as it take your class
>>>Hahaha! Thank you very much!! I want to keep on leaving messages in this page.
Because I hope that you want to proofread the any lapse or mistakes if there any mistake in this sentence of message.
>>>Because I am expecting you to proofread any mistakes in my composition.
Have a nice weekend and I’ll see you on Monday!
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