Nice to meet you!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Leon,
Thank You for doing your assignment
It\'s nice to meet you.
Teacher Brian,
Nice to meet you! My service to you.
>>It was Nice to meet you.
The most important why learn English is for my job and next reason i will go on a trip with my family soon.
>>The most important thing why I want to learn English is because of my job and I am going on a trip with my family soon.
I want to speak English well at the company and during my travel!
>>The most important thing why I want to learn English is because of my job and I am going on a trip with my family soon. I want to speak fluently in English at work and when I travel,
The place will go on a trip to Spain.
>>I am going to Spain
I don\'t have any collectly plan yet. But i will be go there.
>>but for now I have no definite plans yet but eventually I am going there.
That\'s why i chose the country lately i looked at Korean TV-show program maded in Spain.
>>I have watched a Korean TV-show that was filmed in Spain
The Spain\'s impressive peaceful impact on me.
>>and it made an impressive impact on me.
I have a lot more to say, but i will stop here for today.
>>there\'s a lot of thing that I would want to say but for now I will stop here
because i\'m very tired and sleepy.
>>because I am very tired and sleepy and I need to rest
tomorrow go out work ㅠㅠ
>>because I have work tomorrow.
Good night! bye~
>>Good night and goodbye.
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