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2011-11-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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This study is examine thoroughly fairy tale text in [이름] Eyre also focusing on [이름]'s rational decision and behavior can be important foundation on gender equality realization. Novel [이름] Eyre came out in Victorian England period, 1847. In that time was not only prosperity period because of the Industrial Revolution but also serious physical and mental suffering time to the child, women and girls. Under this situation, an alternative to suffering, child and women could get spiritual comfort from fairy tale's heros. so as a natural result, many people enjoy reading them or keep have a fairy tale's fantasy in their's heart. Bronte's novel [이름] Eyre could attract reader's interest(attention) with special meaning that have a fantasy to affect in novel's feature. [이름] Eyre bears a strong relationship to fairy tales in terms of allusions, parallels, characterization, and overall plot structure. in addition to gothic novels, fairy tales greatly inspired Charlotte Bronte's creation of the novel. Perhaps the most distinctive character type of fairy tales that the author introduced to her novel was an innocent child as victimized heroine, which was successfully incarnated in [이름] Eyre. In creating the novel, Bronte was working within the heritage of Romanticism which celebrated ballads, folklore and fairy tales. more specifically, she succeeded in adding fairy tales to color a serious novel of passion. Significant fairy tale elements contained in the novel include : wicked stepmother and fairy godmother figures, the universal "Cinderella" success story in which the heroine overcoming the social competition of mean stepsister figures marries the aristocratic figures, the pattern of journeys in which the heroine returns to her starting point and happy endings. Bronte's first major allusion to fairy tales in [이름] Eyre can be found in child's view of the surrounding world. The reader's attention is also drawn into parallels between [이름] Eyre and the "Bluebeard." Definitely “Bluebeard", "Gulliver's Travels". "Beauty and the Beast" and "Cinderella" can be related to the novel. The enduring appeal of [이름] Eyre resides in the fact that intense personal daydreams conform to fairy tale patterns in storytelling which are universally satisfying. so, when we face [이름] Eyre, we get experience the mystery and strong impression also even feel the delight and fear. and we become absorbed in a boundless dreamland Even though, [이름] Eyre drawn into many parallels between Cinderella, but have clearly one different. in creating a character, in the Cinderella, a heroine Cinderella was passively that just await to be rescue and change, completely not act. but [이름] has positive choice and action that have a dramatic effect to change in the herself and another people. so, [이름] Eyre break from a typical prince-Cinderella structure and showed us the independent feminity. Bronte also emphasized that control the feelings and get the rational patterns of behavior to survive with identity establishment in those society as a female. She presents a perfect union that two people enter into a new relation based on rational in realistically equal condition. also she make people keep a thing carefully their dream and hope by creative beautiful fancy fairy tale world, contrastively at that time, in destitution industrial society

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Good morning Miss [이름]. Nice to meet you! Thank you so much for providing a time to make your composition. Fairy tale stories give us a comfort from our personal undertakings. It\'s good to know that you also like fairy tales. Anyways, kindly check some minor corrections that I made. Hope you\'ll have a great day. See you in class. This study is examine thoroughly fairy tale text in [이름] Eyre also focusing on [이름]\'s rational decision and behavior can be important foundation on gender equality realization. >> This study was conducted to examine thoroughly the fairy tale story of [이름] Eyre which focuses on [이름]\'s rational decision and behavior which is an important foundation on gender equality realization. Novel [이름] Eyre came out in Victorian England period, 1847. >> Novel [이름] Eyre came out in Victorian England period in 1847  In that time was not only prosperity period because of the Industrial Revolution but also serious physical and mental suffering time to the child, women and girls. >> It was Industrial Revolution period at that time so there were serious physical and mental sufferings among children and women. Under this situation, an alternative to suffering, child and women could get spiritual comfort from fairy tale\'s heros. >> Under this situation, children and women seek comfort from fairy tale heroes.  so as a natural result, many people enjoy reading them or keep have a fairy tale\'s fantasy in their\'s heart. >> So, many people enjoy reading them or keep a fairy tale fantasy in their hearts. Bronte\'s novel [이름] Eyre could attract reader\'s interest(attention) with special meaning that have a fantasy to affect in novel\'s feature. >> Bronte\'s novel [이름] Eyre could attracts reader\'s interest (attention) with a special meaning that has a fantasy to affect in novel\'s feature.[이름] Eyre bears a strong relationship to fairy tales in terms of allusions, parallels, characterization, and overall plot structure. >> [이름] Eyre bears a strong relationship to fairy tales in terms of allusion, parallel, characterization, and overall plot structure.  in addition to gothic novels, fairy tales greatly inspired Charlotte Bronte\'s creation of the novel. >> In addition to gothic novels, fairy tales greatly inspired Charlotte Bronte\'s creation of the novel. Perhaps the most distinctive character type of fairy tales that the author introduced to her novel was an innocent child as victimized heroine, which was successfully incarnated in [이름] Eyre. >> Perhaps the most distinctive character type of fairy tales that the author introduced to her novel was an innocent child as a victimized heroine, which was successfully incarnated in [이름] Eyre. In creating the novel, Bronte was working within the heritage of Romanticism which celebrated ballads, folklore and fairy tales. >> CORRECT!  more specifically, she succeeded in adding fairy tales to color a serious novel of passion. >> More specifically, she succeeded in adding fairy tales to color a serious novel of passion. Significant fairy tale elements contained in the novel include : wicked stepmother and fairy godmother figures, the universal \"Cinderella\" success story in which the heroine overcoming the social competition of mean stepsister figures marries the aristocratic figures, the pattern of journeys in which the heroine returns to her starting point and happy endings. >> CORRECT!Bronte\'s first major allusion to fairy tales in [이름] Eyre can be found in child\'s view of the surrounding world. >> CORRECT!  The reader\'s attention is also drawn into parallels between [이름] Eyre and the \"Bluebeard.\" >> CORRECT! Definitely “Bluebeard\", \"Gulliver\'s Travels\". \"Beauty and the Beast\" and \"Cinderella\" can be related to the novel. >>\'Bluebeard\', \'Gulliver\'s Travels\', \"Beauty and the Beast\" and \"Cinderella\" can be related to the novel. The enduring appeal of [이름] Eyre resides in the fact that intense personal daydreams conform to fairy tale patterns in storytelling which are universally satisfying. >> CORRECT!  so, when we face [이름] Eyre, we get experience the mystery and strong impression also even feel the delight and fear.  >> So, when we face [이름] Eyre, we get to experience mystery and strong impression also even feels delight and fear. and we become absorbed in a boundless dreamland >> And we become absorbed in a boundless dreamland.Even though, [이름] Eyre drawn into many parallels between Cinderella, but have clearly one different. in creating a character, >> Even though [이름] Eyre was drawn into many parallels between Cinderella, there\'s a clear definition in creating the character.  in the Cinderella, a heroine Cinderella was passively that just await to be rescue and change, completely not act. but [이름] has positive choice and action that have a dramatic effect to change in the herself and another people. >> In Cinderella, a heroine Cinderella was passively just awaiting to be rescued and changed, but doesn\'t completely act. but [이름] has positive choice and action that have a dramatic effect to change in the herself and another people. >> But [이름] has a positive choice and action that has a dramatic effect to change her and other people. so, [이름] Eyre break from a typical prince-Cinderella structure and showed us the independent feminity. >> So, [이름] Eyre break from a typical prince-Cinderella structure and showed us the independent feminists.Bronte also emphasized that control the feelings and get the rational patterns of behavior to survive with identity establishment in those society as a female. >> Bronte also emphasized how to control feelings and get the rational patterns of behavior to survive with identity establishment in those societies as a female. She presents a perfect union that two people enter into a new relation based on rational in realistically equal condition. >> She presents a perfect union how two people enter into a new relationship based on rational in a realistically equal condition. also she make people keep a thing carefully their dream and hope by creative beautiful fancy fairy tale world, contrastively at that time, in destitution industrial society >> Also, she makes people keep a thing carefully about their dreams and hopes of a creative and beautiful fancy fairy tale world, contrastively at that time, in a devastated industrial society.

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