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2014-07-15 · 첨삭 강사 Debby

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No, No. I haven't said my voice is good. I never think that my voice is good. It's little embrassing. Is it because of the sound like DJ? kkk Anyway, it's really nice to talk with you again. I don't mean to take a video class, but it's also good to talk with you like this. After the plan taking a part time job was failed, I don't know how I should do for spending this vacation. I need to have time to think for it. Let's talk tommorow again. Take care. :D <Essay> My worst habit is to bite my nails. I have done this since I was very young. I want to stop this but I'm biting my nails in unconsciousness. There's a word "Old habits die hard" originated from the old days in Korea. I think all what ancestors said are right...

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Hi there [이름]!^^ Welcome back! Hahahahaha.. I still think that your voice is good. Everytime I call you I want to request for a song because you sound like a DJ! hahahaha Take it as a compliment please.^^ It was really nice having you back and I hope to have great classes with you with the video this time!^^ Take care!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are  my corrections for you today: No, No. I haven\'t said my voice is good. >> I did not mention my voice is good.  I never think that my voice is good. >> I never thought that my voice is good. It\'s little embrassing. >> It\'s a little embrassing.  Is it because of the sound like DJ? kkk >> Is it because of the sound like a DJ? kkkAnyway, it\'s really nice to talk with you again. >> CORRECT OR> It\'s great having a conversation with you again today. I don\'t mean to take a video class, but it\'s also good to talk with you like this.>> CORRECT OR> Our class wasn\'t supposed to be with the video but it was nice.After the plan taking a part time job was failed, I don\'t know how I should do for spending this vacation. >> After the plan of taking a part time job has failed, I don\'t know what I should do for spending this vacation.  I need to have time to think for it. >> CORRECT OR> I need to have time to think about it.Let\'s talk tommorow again. >> CORRECT OR> I will see you tomorrow.Take care. :D >> CORRECT OR> Take lots of care.<Essay>My worst habit is to bite my nails. >> CORRECT OR> I have a bad habit of biting my nails. I have done this since I was very young. >> CORRECT OR> I did this since I was young. I want to stop this but I\'m biting my nails in unconsciousness. >> CORRECT OR> I want to stop this but I\'m biting my nails unconsciously.  There\'s a word \"Old habits die hard\" originated from the old days in Korea. >>There\'s a saying \"Old habits die hard\" that originated from the olden days in Korea.  I think all what ancestors said are right...  >> I think what the ancestors said were right... 

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