Nice weather!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi there! It’s finally started weekend. I had a such great time when I get up this morning. Do you guess why I felt good? I am going to hike with my buddy today. That is my favorite it. I will post some pictures here. But I will be a moment of conflict that is another big meeting. And one of my favorite senior is coming from Pohang city. So I am [Name] about going to the theater or attending the meeting. In my mind I really want to meet him but if I attend the gathering I will get drunk.
Anyway have a great weekend!
강사 첨삭
Hi there, William!^^
Thank you for sharing.
Based on what you shared in class, at least, you were able to control your alcohol intake.
So, it\'s still good.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there! It’s finally started weekend.
>>Hi there! The weekend has finally started.
Thank you for sharing.
Based on what you shared in class, at least, you were able to control your alcohol intake.
So, it\'s still good.
_T. SHAY^^
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Hi there! It’s finally started weekend.
>>Hi there! The weekend has finally started.
OR: Hi there! Finally, weekend is here.
I had a such great time when I get up this morning.
>>I had such a great time when I got up this morning.
I had a such great time when I get up this morning.
>>I had such a great time when I got up this morning.
OR: I felt so good when I woke up this morning.
Do you guess why I felt good?
>>Can you guess why I felt good?
I am going to hike with my buddy today.
>>Correct
OR: My buddy and I are going hiking today.
That is my favorite it.
>>That is my favorite part.
I will post some pictures here.
>>Correct
OR: I\'ll share some pictures here.
But I will be a moment of conflict that is another big meeting.
>>But I will have a brief conflict because there is another big meeting.
And one of my favorite senior is coming from Pohang city. So I am [Name] about going to the theater or attending the meeting.
>>And one of my favorite seniors is coming from Pohang city, so I am thinking about whether to go to the theater or attend the meeting.
In my mind I really want to meet him but if I attend the gathering I will get drunk.
>>I really want to meet him, but if I attend the gathering I will end up drinking too much.
Do you guess why I felt good?
>>Can you guess why I felt good?
I am going to hike with my buddy today.
>>Correct
OR: My buddy and I are going hiking today.
That is my favorite it.
>>That is my favorite part.
I will post some pictures here.
>>Correct
OR: I\'ll share some pictures here.
But I will be a moment of conflict that is another big meeting.
>>But I will have a brief conflict because there is another big meeting.
And one of my favorite senior is coming from Pohang city. So I am [Name] about going to the theater or attending the meeting.
>>And one of my favorite seniors is coming from Pohang city, so I am thinking about whether to go to the theater or attend the meeting.
In my mind I really want to meet him but if I attend the gathering I will get drunk.
>>I really want to meet him, but if I attend the gathering I will end up drinking too much.
OR: I\'d love to see him, but going to the gathering means I might drink too much.
Anyway have a great weekend!
>>Correct
OR: Anyway enjoy your weekend!
Anyway have a great weekend!
>>Correct
OR: Anyway enjoy your weekend!
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