Nice weather Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Tina! I think today's weather is nice. I hope that you have such a great Tuesday. Yesterday I went to library to read some English magazine. I thought it's really helpful to raise my reading skill and more interesting than read a English books. I made a decision to go to read a English Magazine there everyday.
And today I will go an authorized phone retail store to complain my phone bill for this month. The phone bill was over charged for about 20000 won. I'm going to resolve this problem definitely today! Have a nice day Tina!
Here is my homework.
1. Can i have some of these kiwis.
2. We saw some dolphins in the sea.
3. They went to town without any money.
4. Buy some apples if you see any.
5. Would you like some more tea?
6. Come and see me any time you want.
Teacher.....why my today's speaking and vocabulary rating is zero...? Am I terrible in today's speaking and vocabulary..?
강사 첨삭
Hello!
I hope that you are having a fine day.
I am so sorry about the ratings earlier.^^
You can check it again, if you have time.
You even did good in your homework so never put in your mind that you are terrible in some aspects of communication.
I even had fun talking to you earlier.
I am truly sorry about this.
Next time, I will see to it that I will accomplish my feedback with no slip.^^
Let us cross our fingers that your problem with your phone bill will be solved.
Smile!
T.Tina^^
Hello Tina!
>> Correct
I think today\'s weather is nice.
>> Correct
I hope that you have such a great Tuesday.
>> I hope that you will have a great Tuesday.
Yesterday I went to library to read some English magazine.
>> Yesterday, I went to the library to read some English magazines.
I thought it\'s really helpful to raise my reading skill and more interesting than read a English books.
>> I thought it\'s really helpful to raise the level of my reading skill and it is even more interesting than some other English books.
I made a decision to go to read a English Magazine there everyday.
>> I made up my mind. I will read an English magazine everyday in the library.
And today I will go an authorized phone retail store to complain my phone bill for this month.
>> And today, I will go to an authorized phone retail store to complain about my phone bill this month.
The phone bill was over charged for about 20000 won.
>> Correct
I\'m going to resolve this problem definitely today!
>> I\'m definitely going to solve this problem today!^^
Have a nice day Tina!
>> Correct
Here is my homework.
>> Correct
1. Can I have some of these kiwis.
>> Correct
2. We saw some dolphins in the sea.
>> Correct
3. They went to town without any money.
>> Correct
4. Buy some apples if you see any.
>> Correct
5. Would you like some more tea?
>> Correct
6. Come and see me any time you want.
>> Correct
Teacher.....why my today\'s speaking and vocabulary rating is zero...?
>> Teacher, how come the ratings for my speaking skill and vocabulary today are both zeros?
Am I terrible in today\'s speaking and vocabulary..?
>> Correct
OR >> Am I terrible today in my speaking and vocabulary?
I hope that you are having a fine day.
I am so sorry about the ratings earlier.^^
You can check it again, if you have time.
You even did good in your homework so never put in your mind that you are terrible in some aspects of communication.
I even had fun talking to you earlier.
I am truly sorry about this.
Next time, I will see to it that I will accomplish my feedback with no slip.^^
Let us cross our fingers that your problem with your phone bill will be solved.
Smile!
T.Tina^^
Hello Tina!
>> Correct
I think today\'s weather is nice.
>> Correct
I hope that you have such a great Tuesday.
>> I hope that you will have a great Tuesday.
Yesterday I went to library to read some English magazine.
>> Yesterday, I went to the library to read some English magazines.
I thought it\'s really helpful to raise my reading skill and more interesting than read a English books.
>> I thought it\'s really helpful to raise the level of my reading skill and it is even more interesting than some other English books.
I made a decision to go to read a English Magazine there everyday.
>> I made up my mind. I will read an English magazine everyday in the library.
And today I will go an authorized phone retail store to complain my phone bill for this month.
>> And today, I will go to an authorized phone retail store to complain about my phone bill this month.
The phone bill was over charged for about 20000 won.
>> Correct
I\'m going to resolve this problem definitely today!
>> I\'m definitely going to solve this problem today!^^
Have a nice day Tina!
>> Correct
Here is my homework.
>> Correct
1. Can I have some of these kiwis.
>> Correct
2. We saw some dolphins in the sea.
>> Correct
3. They went to town without any money.
>> Correct
4. Buy some apples if you see any.
>> Correct
5. Would you like some more tea?
>> Correct
6. Come and see me any time you want.
>> Correct
Teacher.....why my today\'s speaking and vocabulary rating is zero...?
>> Teacher, how come the ratings for my speaking skill and vocabulary today are both zeros?
Am I terrible in today\'s speaking and vocabulary..?
>> Correct
OR >> Am I terrible today in my speaking and vocabulary?
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