Nina :)))

2012-11-22 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Nina nice to meet you again :) ♥♥ There are my answer. 1. b 2. a 3. a 4. a 5. c 6. b 7. a 8. b 9. a 10. c I'm glad because we can meet online too! haha Thank you for your fixing :)!!! I feel sorry because I always say to you that 'I'm busy'. I think I don't have many tasks that I couldn't. But I can't afford to take a rest during tough day(?). I hope that I can make a smile although I feel exausted. I want to focus on what I'm doing all the time with full of dilligence. I want to meet you on Friday. Happy happy Friday haha thx >_< salamat pho♡♡♡ [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hi my dearest [이름]^^ You surprised me. Thank you for doing your homework and sending me a composition about how you feel. I am really happy that you are my student. You always put a smile on my face everyday. You are the reason why I go to work. If I may ask you,what do you mean by thank you for your fixing? I wasn\'t able to understand it well.Hahahaha Mianhamnida^^ I want to greet you advance Happy Friday. Have a great night!Kudos for your homework^^ Keep it up^^ See you tomorrow^^ Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Hello, Nina nice to meet you again :) ♥♥ >>Correct!There are my answer. >>These are my answers:1. b >>Correct!2. a >>C3. a >>Correct!4. a >>Correct!5. c >>Correct!6. b >>Correct!7. a >>Correct!8. b >>Correct!9. a >>B10. c>>Correct!I\'m glad because we can meet online too! haha >>Correct! OR >>I\'m glad because we can send emails to each other.Thank you for your fixing :)!!! >>Thank for fixing my sentences. OR >>Thank you for correcting my sentences.I feel sorry because I always say to you that \'I\'m busy\'. >>I feel sorry because I always tell you that I am busy.I think I don\'t have many tasks that I couldn\'t. >>I think I don\'t have a lot of tasks that I couldn\'t finish.But I can\'t afford to take a rest during tough day(?). >>But I can\'t afford to take a rest during a tough day.I hope that I can make a smile although I feel exausted. >>I hope that I can make you smile although I feel exhausted. (Be careful of the spelling.)I want to focus on what I\'m doing all the time with full of dilligence. >>I want to focus on what I\'m doing all the time,being a diligent person. OR >>I want to be a diligent person,to stay focused with all the things that I need to work on.I want to meet you on Friday. >>Correct!Happy happy Friday haha >>Correct!thx >_<salamat pho♡♡♡[이름]

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