Nina :)

2012-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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There's no Moday blue as long as we meet on every Monday, haha! It's easy to feel drowsy after eating. But after talking with you, I can get a fresh feeling as motivation to learn English. I was so busy today. And my schedule is officially done right now. But I have to get organized what I've learned. I'm always appreciated your help. Take care, see you tomorrow! 1.This room is to dark. You'd better turn the lights on. 2.I wonder why he hasn't turned up yet. The meeting will start in ten minutes. 3.He wanted to join the army, but was turned down due to his health problems. 4.The teacher asked me to turn this piece of prose up verse. 5.One's success usually turns on one's qualifications. 6.Only one hundred people were admitted to the stadium. All the other people had to be turned off . 7.Before leaving the house, don't forget to turn off the lights. 8.He turned out the management of the company to his oldest son

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HI [이름]^^ Thank you for always making me feel better everyday. I am really happy that you always find time to send me a composition. I am always grateful that you are my student. Job well done with your homework! I am so proud of you! Keep up the good work! See you tomorrow^^ Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: There\'s no Moday blue as long as we meet on every Monday, haha! >>There\'s no Moday blue as long as we meet every Monday, haha!It\'s easy to feel drowsy after eating. >>I feel drowsy after eating. But after talking with you, I can get a fresh feeling as motivation to learn English. >> But after talking to you, I feel re-freshed and motivated to learn English.I was so busy today. >>Correct! OR >> I was really busy today. And my schedule is officially done right now. >> Correct! OR >> I\'m done with all of my appointments today.But I have to get organized what I\'ve learned. >> But I have to organized what I\'ve learned today. OR >> I have to organize the things I\'ve learned today.I\'m always appreciated your help. >> I always appreciate your help.Take care, see you tomorrow!>> Correct!1.This room is to dark. You\'d better turn the lights on. >>Correct!2.I wonder why he hasn\'t turned up yet. The meeting will start in ten minutes. >>Correct!3.He wanted to join the army, but was turned down due to his health problems. >>Correct!4.The teacher asked me to turn this piece of prose up verse. >>into 5.One\'s success usually turns on one\'s qualifications. >>Correct!6.Only one hundred people were admitted to the stadium. All the other people had to be turned off . >>away7.Before leaving the house, don\'t forget to turn off the lights. >>Correct!8.He turned out the management of the company to his oldest son >>over

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