Nina =)

2013-01-02 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Nina =) !!!!!!!! Hello, Happy New Year :) I'm so sorry that I couldn't answer your phone. I don't know why, but there was a problem in my phone electronically ㅜ_ㅜ When I was about to answer your call, my phone turned off again and again. I was so sad because I wasn't able to say "Happy new year". However, finally we could meet tomorrow. wow it was very long vacation. I hope you had a great time. here in Seoul. It's snowy, I slide on the ice many times nowadays oh my god :( hahaha I could feel joy of learning English because of you. I really really want to say thank you. Example: ___ she _____ the car? (to clean) Answer: Has she cleaned the car? 1. What have you written in your text? (to write) 2. Has Bill turned off the radio? (to turn off) 3. Have you ever flied in a helicopter? (to fly) 4. Who has broken the window? (to break) 5. Have you ever cooked for your friends? (to cook)

강사 첨삭

Hey there! Happy New Year!

Thank you again for finding time to do your homework.

I missed you.

I\'m glad that we could finally meet tomorrow.

I\'m sorry about your phone by the way.

I had a great time this Christmas. I hope you had a great time too!

It\'s really nice to hear that you are happy learning English with me.

Regarding your sentences today, they were very impressive!

I made some corrections as well, please go over them!

See you tomorrow.

Take care!

_T.Nina

Nina =) !!!!!!!!

>>Correct
Hello, Happy New Year :)

>>Correct

I\'m so sorry that I couldn\'t answer your phone.

>>I\'m so sorry that I couldn\'t answer your call.

I don\'t know why, but there was a problem in my phone electronically ㅜ_ㅜ

>>Correct

When I was about to answer your call, my phone turned off again and again.

>>When I was about to answer your call, my phone kept on restarting.
I was so sad because I wasn\'t able to say \"Happy new year\".

>>Correct
However, finally, we could meet tomorrow.

>>Correct
wow it was very long vacation.

>>Wow, it was a very long vacation.
I hope you had a great time.

>>Correct
here in Seoul. It\'s snowy, I slide on the ice many times nowadays oh my god :(
hahaha

>>Here in Seoul, it\'s snowy. I slip on the ice many times nowadays.

I could feel joy of learning English because of you.

>>I feel the joy of learning English because of you.
I really really want to say thank you.

>>Correct
Example: ___ she _____ the car? (to clean)
Answer: Has she cleaned the car?
1. What have you written in your text? (to write)
>>Correct
2. Has Bill turned off the radio? (to turn off)

>>Correct
3. Have you ever flied in a helicopter? (to fly)
>>Have you ever flown in a helicopter?
4. Who has broken the window? (to break)

>>Correct
5. Have you ever cooked for your friends? (to cook)

>>Correct

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