Nina =)
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey there! Happy New Year!
Thank you again for finding time to do your homework.
I missed you.
I\'m glad that we could finally meet tomorrow.
I\'m sorry about your phone by the way.
I had a great time this Christmas. I hope you had a great time too!
It\'s really nice to hear that you are happy learning English with me.
Regarding your sentences today, they were very impressive!
I made some corrections as well, please go over them!
See you tomorrow.
Take care!
_T.Nina
Nina =) !!!!!!!!
>>Correct
Hello, Happy New Year :)
I\'m so sorry that I couldn\'t answer your phone.
>>I\'m so sorry that I couldn\'t answer your call.
I don\'t know why, but there was a problem in my phone electronically ㅜ_ㅜ
>>Correct
When I was about to answer your call, my phone turned off again and again.
>>When I was about to answer your call, my phone kept on restarting.
I was so sad because I wasn\'t able to say \"Happy new year\".
>>Correct
However, finally, we could meet tomorrow.
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wow it was very long vacation.
>>Wow, it was a very long vacation.
I hope you had a great time.
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here in Seoul. It\'s snowy, I slide on the ice many times nowadays oh my god :(
hahaha
>>Here in Seoul, it\'s snowy. I slip on the ice many times nowadays.
I could feel joy of learning English because of you.
>>I feel the joy of learning English because of you.
I really really want to say thank you.
>>Correct
Example: ___ she _____ the car? (to clean)
Answer: Has she cleaned the car?
1. What have you written in your text? (to write)
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2. Has Bill turned off the radio? (to turn off)
>>Correct
3. Have you ever flied in a helicopter? (to fly)
>>Have you ever flown in a helicopter?
4. Who has broken the window? (to break)
>>Correct
5. Have you ever cooked for your friends? (to cook)
>>Correct
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