Nina :)

2013-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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Nina! I'm sorry I can't answer ur call today T.T Now I'm travelling with my family. But I don't have batteries. sorry see you tomorrow!!!

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]^^ I\'m sorry to hear that you will not be able to take the class today. =c I do understand. I hope that you will have a great time with your family, I received you message late eventhough you want to postpone the class I still need to call you because it is the policy of our company.If you want to postpone the class you need to call my managers about it.Anyway,thank you for sending me a message.I am looking forward to talk to you tomorrow. Have a nice day! Take Care! Teacher Nina Here are my corrections for you: Nina!I\'m sorry >> Correct I can\'t answer ur call today T.T >> I can\'t answer your call today, OR >> I can\'t take the class today.Now I\'m travelling with my family. >> Correct OR >> I\'m currently travelling with my family.But I don\'t have batteries. >> I ran out of battery. OR >> My mobile phone ran out of battery.sorry see you tomorrow!!! >> Correct (Don\'t forget to capitalize the first letter of your sentences.)

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