nineteenth homework

2018-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Q : What are the interesting things you have? A : I like cleaning so I used to clean whenever I take a break. I especially clean my house when I’m confused. After I clean my room, I feel better than before. Q : What is your hobby and how it is helped in educating the students? A : My hobby is singing. I especially like singing memorizing the lyrics. So I used to memorize a difficult formula by making it a song. Such my hobby is helped in teaching some students English grammar and the complex sentences. Q : What is your teaching philosophy? A : I have my teaching philosophy that a basic is not easy but important. Many students often miss the basic principles and only solve the difficult questions. In fact, to smoothly solve them, it is important to learn the basic things first. Once we learn them, we can solve many complex questions based on them.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]!
I hope I was able to help you with your answers. Let me know later in class if you have further questions. See ya!
~T. Lynn
Q : What are the interesting things you have? (Q: What are the interesting things you do?)
A : I like cleaning so I used to clean whenever I take a break.
>> I like cleaning so whenever I have a break, I clean.
I especially clean my house when I’m confused.
>> correct!
After I clean my room, I feel better than before.
>> correct!
MY ANSWER>> Music is the most interesting for me in this world so I guess the most interesting thing I have will be my music file. My phone, my computer and my tablet are full of songs in different genres and they are also in different languages. I listen to American pop and country music, K-pop, Chinese ballad, Thai love songs and original Pilipino Music.
Q : What is your hobby and how it is helped in educating the students?
A : My hobby is singing.
>> correct!
I especially like singing and memorizing the lyrics.
>> correct!
So I used to memorize a difficult formula by making it a song.
>>
So I used to memorize a difficult formula by making it into a song.
Such my hobby is helped in teaching some students English grammar and the complex sentences.
>> Singing is a big help in teaching students English grammar and complex sentences.
Q : What is your teaching philosophy?
A : I have my teaching philosophy that a basic is not easy but important.
>> My teaching philosophy is knowing the basic is the most important.
OR>> My teaching philosophy is learning the basic is the most important building blocks in learning.
Many students often miss the basic principles and only solve the difficult questions.
>> correct!
In fact, to smoothly solve them, it is important to learn the basic things first.
>> correct!
Once we learn them, we can solve many complex questions based on them.
>> correct!

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