Ninja life
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! If you want to become a ninja you also have to eat ninja food. Well done on this composition! Keep it up
- Teacher Ivy. :)
The ninja food are salad , rice, apple, sushi, and natto.
>> The ninja foods are salad, rice, apple, sushi, and natto.
Something food can jump high.
>> They can make you jump high.
Ninja needs on a diet.
>> Ninja needs to be on a diet.
Ninja works are to kill bad people and samurai.
>> Their job is to kill bad people with a samurai.
Ninja often have to sleeps outside.
>> They often have to sleep outside.
Ninjas play campfire.
>> They play in the campfire.
Ninja life sounds of are fun.
>> Ninja life sounds fun.
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